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for a class project
its due friday...i just want some feedback on how i can improve on it visually
thanks!

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:iconvolcomchick:
really like this :D I'm not usually big on photomanips but this one it's good

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i'd use less texture in the bottom and more in the top (grain and scratches, maybe?), apart from that it looks great. makes me think of camus, who is, shockingly, an existentialist.

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Thanks I appreciate your advice. Some grain would look mighty nice.

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to improve it?
it's well good!
the only thing is that i had to look more than twice to see there was something in front of the arms
could be clearer?
i dont know :D
good as!!

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I think that is is almost perfect the way it is. I'd maybe blend the grass bit into the sky because it seems a little off.

But it's very good!

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Thats so strange, I'm doing a uni project on existentialism as well :D
Must be a popular topic!

Really liking this image :) great job

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